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life 1 min read 692 views Jun 18, 2014

The Man Who Took It All (R.I.P to my sister)

He took it all away

Like a thief that lived in the night

Its been years

But it still wasn't right

A n**** who had nothing better else to do

Its sad because out of people it had to be you

A act so violent and wrong and evil

And he seemed to enjoy himself as he took away your wellbeing

He held a knife so you couldn't scream

And it hurt like it happen to me

Like I lived thru the sh*t

It made me truly believe that s ain't sh*t

And I can't wait until the day

That they lock that sick bastard away

And throw away the key

Evan tho your no longer here physically

I know you can see

I'm sorry that terrible stuff had to be

That you were raped by a thief.

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scash102

Very powerful and something Beyond. The best poets to me are those who can not only speak for themselves but speak out for others.wet in this together

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