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life 1 min read 756 views Jun 21, 2014

Circumstantial being is she.

The Sweet, innocent...yet no different.

Unique at first sight...yet there's no difference.

The hazel windows revealing a cold soul.

In the epicentre, a cold winter in a dark pit, opening and closing, opening and.

Blood red lips where fibs slip, truths broken, reality shown after a sip from the flammable substance.

Corruptness. Sweet and innocent but no more.

Damsel in distress urging to impress, in her blue satin dress, but not the soft silk as you would think.

Gets deeper, lingerie holding her firm breast, whisked around, the black polyester stretches to her 4th base.

But that's all on the Turkish tapestry, some of it is torn, her heart too is scorned, pillows damp.

Tears of joy in another sense.

If this makes sense.

She's making cents, with regrets, she let her prized gift be caressed, pounded, bruised, succeeding a transaction and...she's on her way.

Sweet and innocent...yet no different.

Unique at first sight but there's no difference.

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tretre

Your work is so beautiful yet makes me think...I really love to read poetry like this. I'm a fan of your writing. Hopefully I can keep up with your poems, but I will always try to read them. You are one in many poets I have on my list of favorites. Always keep that pen movin Number3. You are one of those poets I look forward to reading their poetry. You are in my list of top 5 poets.

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Number3

Thank you so much tretre, this means a lot, coming from a poet I respect so much, whose style is trully unique....The loves all round.. Word Up Tretre

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2b2b2

Awesome Capture....Well Woven Number3.....Bravo!!!

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tretre

Your very welcome Number3!! I appericate the respect...your a unique poet and I love your style...I look forward to reading more of your work.. A cup of lemon tea and I'm ready to read what you have to give..Always keep that pen movin Number3!!!! :)

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Intheshadowz

Loved this also, i agree with tretre, but to say top5 would be crazy to me because everyonez my favorite on here, a poet of any kind iz appreciated. Ur a gifted writer and the way u write capturez the mind in a chokehold, ❤️🌹💯

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