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life 1 min read 683 views Jun 23, 2014

Untitled (Just Venting)

You were someone great and someone I thought I lost

But with every mistake you make in life

It always come with a cost

So giving myself away so easily without a second thought

Or even a small doubt that what I was doing was wrong

Or how this is ruining all the right I believe

I let myself be deceived

And tricked

And fooled

I broke plenty of gods rules

And so I say sorry to the people who were all in involved

And to myself

For allowing myself going to that low level

I didn't know but now I realized I was dancing with the devil.

Just need to get some things off my chest

From this day forward I'm doing my best.

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Concise vent....Wow....Write On!

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