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life 1 min read 481 views Jun 28, 2014

not really rhythmic, but a thought.

Let me paint you a picture. Imagine one of those mean comics where a fishing poll is tied to the fat kids back dangling a Twinkie in front of him. Now imagine a hundred dollar bill dangling. Suddenly everyone's the fat kid and no ones laughing

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Wordman21

Real...

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scash102

Thats a great visual

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tretre

I like this poem. In reality every is like the fat kid when it comes to money. People even kill over it so in the end its not funny. Love this...Beautiful job TyleBanasiewicz! Welcome to the Vibe!

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DallasCowgirl

Truth!

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