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life 1 min read 512 views Jul 18, 2014

My thoughts

Alone with my thoughts. ..so let's talk...

It's been a struggle mentally to break free of the chains that have shackled me

Drowning in nothing but your constant presence

Hellish thoughts at war with Heavens mark

Slipping past the dusk into something so dark

I need of a light but I'll settle for a spark

Why won't you let me go, just let me be

Let me be free, free from our chemical bond that tortures me

Why do you plague my brain with cynicism and portray it as a realists vision

I'm suffocating in your misery, your life is sucking the life outta me...

...but it sucks because without you there is no me...All alone with my thoughts feeding me depressing memories

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