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life 1 min read 505 views Jul 19, 2014

Beauty

step through the doors
your aura lights up the room
the way the light shines distinguishes my mood
beauty, real beauty
outer and inner
beauty is timeless
but it doesn't mean anything to me if it doesn't come with kindness
you walked in, my gray cloud ran out of rain
you walked in, my troublesome side was tamed
your smile is astonishing
and if im the one who causes it, it means the world to me
im here if you need me
dont let the song end, keep that on repeat
~PEACE

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