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just different 1 min read 688 views Jul 26, 2014

Life moves

how many boxes will it take to get away

to pack up and move today

how much newspaper

will I need to wrap these figurines

 

in order to lighten my load

how much do I have to give away

to complete the task

how long will it take

 

how long will I spend time procrastinating

waiting and self debating

how many goodbyes

how many will cry

how many tears will fall from my eyes

 

how many miles will it take

how much will I have to sale

who will I tell

if i left in the night

who will I wake

 

where will I start

what room will I tare apart

what will I leave behind

what's missing

that I'm trying to find

 

what have I been waiting for

to return back to me

if life is a school of learning

what lesson do I need to learn

what should my major be

 

and to what degree

should I turn

I'm just trying to move

but what's moving me

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tretre

I wonder about you WizeDom...I wonder what your thought process is when you write. This poem reminds me of all the questions I ask myself sometimes. If I were to leave who will miss me, who will ask where I'm going...Beautiful, a poet at work. Always keep that pen movin WizeDom!!!

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love_supreme

Very nice

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