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life 1 min read 17 views Nov 6, 2026

It's A Trick, Not A Treat

We tend to celebrate too soon

 

Our “HIP HIP HURRAY” is premature

 

We applaud what’s yet to be seen

 

The promise not the deliverance

 

It’s not over it's not done

Until it is we have not won

 

We’ve  been fighting too hard to drop our guards

 

A moment of peace is only temporary relief

 

Because the cause of the the struggle is only on pause

 

Depending on the the past what’s coming is pending

 

It’s a scam 

Flimflam

Spam

 

Red to Blue

Pot to Pan

 

A change in appearance

Not a change in experience 

 

High price

Low morale

 

Man’s agenda

God’s plan

 

Heed the warning 

It’s an unfinished performance 

 

Hold your applause 






 

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