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just different 1 min read 664 views Jul 26, 2014

Left wanting

the thing about having a good time

is the fact that good times don't last

not to say that bad times will follow

but the moment has past and can only

be recalled in memory, a memory that

brings back the feelings that can sometimes

become unpleasant when it fades

we always remember those days

we often talk about those days

some of us are still trying to live

those days

the clothes we wear

the way we act

how we style our hair

and the things we say

even though we know that

those days are not today

we still have the need to

fill the empty void

so that we can feel the same way

when we had a good time

with those we love and those

who loved us

those who left and took

those days away

 

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tretre

I really like this poem. It makes me think of those who have passed away but we try to keep their memory alive by doing what we did when they were still with us. Beautiful WizeDom. Always keep that pen movin!

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scash102

I live in my memories sometimes, especially childhood. I like this write, absolutely great poem.

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love_supreme

Excellent write

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