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life 2 min read 759 views Jul 26, 2014

More Than Friends:

I can't bring myself to tell you this face to face,

I'm afraid of what you might have to say.

We've been friends for years now, and

All those years I've secretly loved you,

I've love you more then I can write in words,

I've tried many times to ignore what I feel, but

My feelings I can't subdue.

I thought I was in complete control of what I felt for you,

but my feelings grew each day, now I don't know what to do.

Is it wrong to feel this way about a friend? Will this mess

up what we have in the end?

I can't help how I feel so I'm spilling my heart out to you,

I hope you take to heart my words that are so true.

When I see you smile, you make me want to surrender,

You make me want to fight for your love, and if I have to

I want to be the first contender.

I dont know how you will respond to this, I 

just needed to tell you how I felt, just take it all in,

dont answer me right away, keep it in your mind

even if its in small bits.

I hope you dont find this uncomfortable,

thats not my intentions, I couldn't tell you to your face,

I thought If I wrote you this letter you'd be more willing to listen.

With that being said, I'll leave you only with these words,

Don't count me out, even though we are friends,

sometimes what your looking for is right in front of you,

just know what I feel for you is true,

I hope you give me a chance to finally love you,

and no matters what happens in the end I will alway be there for you.

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scash102

Alright, alright! That's sweet! Wish you the best!

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tretre

Thank you Scash for always showing me love. I'm glad you liked this poem. It's not about me it was inspired by a movie I saw today. :) Always keep that pen movin!

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scash102

Lol, well i loved it, as well as alot of your other work n you're welcome. Likewise

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xclusive

You know what they say, you gotta be friends first. Great write nonetheless. Keep the pen moving

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tretre

Thank You Xclusive...That is very true. You gotta be friends first before something else comes out of it. Thank you for taking the time to read my poem, Thanks for showin me love. Keep that pen movin!

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tretre

I'm glad you liked it Scash:) It means a lot to me and it keeps me motivated to keep my pen movin. Inspiration comes from everywhere keep your eyes open and carry a pen and a pad everywhere you go because you never know. :)

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2b2b2

Really Tight

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love_supreme

Excellent write

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