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life
I sit here tonight at my window watching the rain fall swiftly,
knowing once it was held gently, in the softness of a cloud;
until an intruder came, causing friction, and the soft cloud burst
letting go the rain in many drops.
I sit here tonight thinking, how much like the soft cloud and the rain,
you and I are knowing once I was held gently,
until an intruder came, causing fricion, and my loving heart burst
letting go the tears in many drops.
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beafaithful says: Tears can cleanse and help one to heal the pain of loss. Very emotional write |
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Kingqadardwon' says: Outstanding capture!poems by this commentor |
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2b2b2 says: Excellent Purge....water is the life....it is the movement....ONE |
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The Immortal Wize says: Most Excellent! Rain away the pain🔥 |
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