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PoeticallyGifted
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been gone for about 5 months. ive written a lot. but i felt compelled to share my new piece "The Heart's Deception".

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My Reality

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my age doesnt define my maturity
am i sure about this? definitely 
yeah im only 15 years young
and only some know the good things my words have done 
my mind is on a rampage
im causing collateral damage
let my words address you
remember i dont wake up every morning just to impress you
i speak the truth 
in a way that it connects with other youth
i do this for me and me alone
, i know im not grown 
but if no one gives me a chance to prove myself, id rather be in the streets getting stoned 
my life was dime bags & cigar wraps
the difference in me now and then is shown in my mind in a time lapse 
it was hard to keep up the act
i didn't know if i was able to give up all that
but i did and now i put my all into my poetic raps 
i could be running from the police 
but now i just give myself and others inner peace 
~PEACE

 

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The Immortal Wize says:

I really do like this open expressive piece.

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PoeticallyGifted says:

thank you very much.

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Big Will says:

Yes, this is pretty good!!!

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PoeticallyGifted says:

Thank you.

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