“been gone for about 5 months. ive written a lot. but i felt compelled to share my new piece "The Heart's Deception".”

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life 1 min read 512 views Jul 28, 2014

Truth Pt. 2

life has been good
ive realized some things i never understood
it used to be good herb, good life
now my own words open my eyes
i became the granter of my own wishes
my own poetry became my prefered scriptures 
all me in this
working a 24 hour shift
shout out to my supporters, my family, and the youth from my church
you are the ones that keep me down on Earth
keep my feet on the ground, 
not high up in the clouds
my sincerest gratitude is bestowed upon you
you got me, i got you, lets teach them to fear the truth
~PEACE

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The Immortal Wize

This is a wonderful poem...much respect

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PoeticallyGifted

Thank you very much.

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paper_feelings

This is very nice...deep and on point!!! Good job!!!

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