The Immortal Wize  | Poetry Vibe
The Immortal Wize

PRO MEMBER

This poet practices good karma and posts comments 449300
contest winner 16
contest winner
lightness in the dark
If you're reading this you're it, get with it stay with it don't quit.

Site Rank

DIAMOND

  4 star general
Total poems   3350
Lifetime Views   749558
Total poems - 7 days   7
Total poems - 30 days   22
Total poems - 90 days   42
Total poems - 365 days   201
you need to login or register to leave a comment

Street level

CATEGORY

just different

Poetry Vibe Mayor

MAYOR of Poetry Vibe. This poet is identified as the mayor of the Vibe for have the most karma ponts. You receive karma points when you comment on poems.

Views: 452

There was a time that I knew that

The struggle wouldn’t last

 

Though it kept on going with everyday

that past

 

There was a time when I packed in a

black trash bag

 

Containing my belongings and all things

that I had

 

Walking the streets in torn tattered rags

never once did I feel bad

 

Never once did I reach back for things

that I had

 

I lit a match behind me and burned down

my past literally

 

I ate a burger from the trash

swepted and spread the ash

 

My mind was ticking away to a blast

what I learned in life thus far

 

Depended on who was teaching the class

half empty or half full?

 

Well that depended on who was holding

 the glass

 

Deep in the depth of my mind I knew that

these times wouldn’t last

 

I bandaged my wounds and at my pain

I stood up and laughed

 

I went from what I had to what I lost

to a peasant from being a boss

 

In no way does this story define me

it just reminds me of what’s behind me

 

Once you’ve been there no matter where

 

Life takes you

you’re never lost

 

 

You must be registered to leave a comment. Registration is FREE.

Register

COMMENTS

 

mrmelody7 says:

Rap on Brother, you are a creative Force
 

Big Will says:

Tight Work!!!

poems by this commentor


 

sensation's of the truth says:

Wow at a lost for words, less then five years ago i was in the same boat. You have touched home for me. Keep writing my brotha and i will keep reading.

poems by this commentor


 

paper_feelings says:

Speechless!!!!! I love poetry as real as this this one.... it always hits the spot, gives me so much feeling.... your a great writer and poet.....

poems by this commentor


login below

Forgot your username?