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just different 1 min read 734 views Jul 29, 2014

Head in the Clouds

like a symphony

 a composition of different

colors

 

textures and elements

 the nature of something

completely put together

 

in order for a purpose

 performance

following a number

 

of forces and Parts of harmony

  puzzling mysteries and identities

like notes in a riddle

 

depicting a limerick or the

 shortest part

of a creatively clever

 

minute haiku

 containing

 sustaining and restraining

 

the measured

 flow

to foil and frustrate

 

the stream from

 cascading

down a slope

 

 into an outcry

 oppressing the motion

into a boil

 

that steams into

 vapor

producing a mind

 

that speaks

 on paper

about the rain

 

that caused The drought

 and the things

 that one dreams about

 

heaven being taken away

 from the sky and angels

no longer having

 

a place to fly

 thunder roaring so loud

that it scared the rain

 

 back into the clouds

  for crying out loud

 

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warneraliyah

👏👏 I like

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mrmelody7

Always on point Sir Wize Dom

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tretre

Love this! This is my kinda poetry. My head is often in the clouds...This is going on my favorites also. Thanks for taking my mind to another place. Always keep that pen movin WizeDom!!!!

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scash102

Im feeling floaty... Lol. Great poem indeed.

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KingQadarDwon'

Nice!!! Great mind..

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wesnesby

daaaamn, pimpin pimpin pimpin. That was cold

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love_supreme

Very nice

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