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life 1 min read 502 views Jul 30, 2014

Suicidal

right now im living in genuine happiness
my biggest fear is that something will happen and once again will turn my life into a pile of sh*t
it seems my problems are indefinite
ive been feeling kind of desolate
will you help me?
im on my knees, begging
feeling hopeless every day of the week is depressing
will you help me stay away from my past suicidal tendancies?
and lead me to a path of kindness & inner peace?
prove to me that you are worthy of leading me to my destiny
or just leave me here to become another inadequate being of society
~PEACE

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scash102

We are all in this poetic family, if we loose voices then the voices left won't be heard.. Keep your head up, we all have a purpose..

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PoeticallyGifted

thank you. And you are completely right.

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The Immortal Wize

We create our own fears therefore we also have the power to destroy them, our greatest fears are things that have already happened and if these things that we fears have already happened, that means that we have survived them right? So continue to survive, you are a warrior suicide is for cowards.

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PoeticallyGifted

Wow. Those words have me speechless. Thank you.

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paper_feelings

This poem is really good. It's a poem and a prayer all in one.... keep it up...

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PoeticallyGifted

yes.it is thank you.

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I like this poem.

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