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just different 2 min read 648 views Jul 30, 2014

Notes to baby Jazz

to the new edition to the family

you're as cute as can be

if you want to keep your teeth

stay away from candy

no pun intended

don't get offended

I'm not talking about you Candy

I mean Candace

my niece you're so sweet

I hope you grow up to be a poet

like me your auntie

honestly

make something out of your life

because lack of ambition

runs in the family

I know you haven't seen me

like a missing person

I'm posted up

I'm on it

to the kinfolks and the in laws

I'm wanted

when they read my scribe

they know I'm alive

telling the truth no lie

I'm deep in the trenches

I don't need no alibi

I'm no copycat

I copyright

do you understand

did you copy that?

I fell on my head many times

sustained so many bumps

the blind can read my mind

back to the subject at hand

life is too short to

comb through it

whatever it is

don't let no one stop you

go and do it

don't stop

blow right through it

and when it's all said and done

you can stand and say

"I DID THAT"

and no one can take it from you

my final remarks to you

is to let your intellect proceed you

hunt for your own food

and don't let anyone feed you

live your life like you're

running with the bulls

don't look back

and move fast

and may your flow last

like grass running through

a cows _ ss

I love you Jazz

 

 

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