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just different 2 min read 648 views Aug 5, 2014

One Imprint

one killed one

one came back

and killed another

one retaliated

and killed ones mother

ones brother

got mad and killed

ones sister

another went out and

killed a bunch of them

some came back

and killed a pack of them

one went to jail and

got killed in a gang fight

one was shot and killed

while sleeping in bed

one night

ones doing life

another ones fingerprints

is on the knife

one got shot by the cops

last night, last night and last night

one got killed in a friendly fight

one got shot 14 times

holding up a liquor store

one wanted to get out

because one couldn't

take no more

that one was found

bound, gagged and dead

from being shot in the head

one got killed in a drug deal

gone bad

one came into the world

with no dad

one is out there real bad

one is slowly dying from

from catching something

that one had

this is one hell of a

true saga

how one falls like

dominoes

one after another

one by one

one and all

we all fall

we are one

joined together

torn flesh

wasted blood

misconstrued way to love

married to the struggle

free falling and

snowballing

downhill

it's just

too heavy to pickup

and carry across the

threshold

 

 

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sensation's of the truth

Ok now this poem is one of my favorite's now. @Wize Dom you have a beautiful gift. Thank you for sharing it with us.

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