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just different 1 min read 530 views Aug 17, 2014

Ode

You’ve been called beautiful

They kiss you passionately

You have the uncanny ability to bring women to their knees

They praise you for all you’re able to do

The spots you’re able to reach

The allure your presence brings

Sometimes I feel like I only know love because of you

I’m jealous of the attention you receive when they’re introduced to you

She always seems to open up and let you in

You’re able to take her places she has never been

Like to the stars and moon without leaving my room

There’s no way I can compete

You make women weak

They love you on nights they hate me

I’ve seen you bring tears to their eyes

Tease in good fun

Some have set out to conquer you but end up on the run

You work long and hard to gain this rep

Seeing you in action makes her wet

They’ve abused me in response to you

Scratches across my back

Bite marks along my chest

All because you’ve gone deeper than most have ever been

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warneraliyah

Wow this is very interesting I had to read twice to catch on nice piece

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