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inpsirational 1 min read 698 views Aug 21, 2014

unfair law

Black people get mad when another a white person takes one of our lives but we do it day by day without blinking twice, we offer them the opportunity to take our minds keeps us oppressed overtime, from Emmett, trayvon, oscar,and mike are symbols of black vs white but there is a bigger picture than race to me it the unfair law we grow to be and their ability to take a life a that was supposedly free, We need to get it right and quit thinking our only enemies is the white man and blame it on the unfair government who has lied, deprived, genocide,guide, tied us up for so many years that we fear who to trust they send us messages of hate and we fall into the trap if you don't realized the subliminal message given to us with these cases still trying to separate our races I tired of seeing lost faces with all of our wonders and feelings always focused that our problems comes behind color we give the government more power to take us under.

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Great Share....Word Up

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Good work beautiful lady

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Warneraliyah

Thank you

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DallasCowgirl

Thanks for sharing. Look forward to more pieces, sis.

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