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Tragedy: A Poetic Short

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They use to tease him incessantly.

He confessed to me

he struck back out of necessity.

Words were a weapon he

came under attack from especially

hard that day. Unexpectedly,

emotional stresses he

used to endure,

he couldn’t take anymore.

He was enraged as he ran out the door.

Echoes of laughter

permeated his grey matter.

His recollection blank thereafter,

until he was captured

covered in the spatter

of blood scared and trembling –

settlin down from the adrenaline rush.

Smokin shotty still stuck in his clutch

after the tragedy.

Still out of touch with the reality

of what he committed.

Somehow unaware that he did it

consciously, but every night he relives it –

awakened by his very own screams.

Even in death they torment him in his cell it seems.



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ferdinandmagellan says:


justformine says:

Deep bro Very good!

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hymnagen says:

Thank you my fellow writers

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2b2b2 says:

Superb Capture

Woven says:

Words can draw blood quicker than a fist. And the impact of your words, captured that endless pain. Terrific write.

hymnagen says:

My humble thanks to you, both. #Respect

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