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just different 1 min read 597 views Aug 31, 2014

First Thought of You

everytime i think of you
i get confused
i tell my self to go for it
what do i have to lose
you're what i want in a girl
you're not like the rest
if i had to rank you against them
you're easily the best
thinking of you
i wonder when
when will the thinking end
and the action begin
when can me and you be
and the games stop
when can i leave the barrel bottom
and finally touch the top

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