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life 1 min read 617 views Sep 1, 2014

Who I Am

Who I am!
I hope you know
how crazy I am
my world
 has only been just for me
it is hard for me to
 let some one in

its selfish
I know
because
 I don't want to share
 who I am

letting someone in
means
letting them see
all of me
even the parts
I don't want them to see
the crazy flaws
that's me

I like me
and
I like my world

sharing
means
I may not live up to
the expectation
of
who I am

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hymnagen

Yes, but to be emotionally guarded is confinement! To be vulnerable is to be FREE. Free yourself and watch your sometimes it works become MOST times! IMHO, this one works. Write on, sista!

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mrmelody7

As long as you know who you are, I don't see a problem

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