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life 1 min read 740 views Sep 2, 2014

My Angel

      My Angel
come dance with me
  in the night sky
shimmering  lace
gemstones embrace
twinkle light
 dancing with my angel
hold my hand
you bring the fans
looking up
they watch us
so bright
in the twinkling night
dancing so fine
to heavenly love
angel of mine
the moon is inclined
to swoon in time
shining down
lighting our path
through the starry night

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mrmelody7

Very nice real nice visual imagery

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Very Beautiful piece.

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