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just different 1 min read 667 views Sep 3, 2014

Free Thinker

Everything in life is systematic

From the mechanic to the organic

But every once in while there's a glitch

That seems to pull the thread from the stitch

Its that one that thinks they equal two

Throwing off the equation so it falls through

Everyone panics to find the solution

To cure the world of the revolution

Breaking the fourth and fifth wall

Their existence makes society fall

Into complete and utter catastrophe

Simply because their mind is free

In a system bulit on control

They can open up a hole

Setting off a chain reaction

So the powers at be must take action

The biggest threat to their way of life

Cuts them down deeper than the sharpest knife

You can't keep them locked up or confined

Do whatever, can't control a free thinkers mind

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Vader

Awesome! I'm gonna make a response to this. Be on the lookout!

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