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life 1 min read 726 views Sep 10, 2014

The way you look at me

Hi! That is the first thing that goes threw my mind, when we become face to face, as your eyes gleamed into mine. Enchanted by your aura, that sends a tingling sensation threwout my body, like a volt of electricity. As if my soul is releasing a signal telling me that you are the chemistry, that completes my 360 degrees. Can you feel the swelling in your chest, the shortness of breath, the watery taste that will not go away, until we finally embrace? Do you hear the yearn from within the feel of victory being replenished? Relinquishing love threw out your entire system, holding onto them last couple of seconds. Thinking there is more to take, so you stop and wait until your conscious tell you, it is ok to separate. Yes, I know how you feel, because I feel it just the same. Now, look at me and kiss me again.'

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2b2b2

Tight piece.....thanks for sharing!!

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hymnagen

Nice. Especially like the closing. Well done

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lashann roberts

this was cute and sweet! Nice write

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lashann roberts

this was cute and sweet! Nice write

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