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just different 1 min read 684 views Sep 11, 2014

Close but not quite

have you felt the heat density on earth?

I believe some people would rather

go to hell to escape their births

since the day I was born

demons have been trying

to feed me but I rather thirst

It sounds like hogwash

I don't care how you clean it

I still won't eat it

though I know how to fall

letting go is not the issue

I struggle to get loose

they're holding on to me

no matter how far I have gone

I have yet to break free

I am a rebelling revolutionary

I do not negotiate with devils

I have managed to outwit

their trickery

I'm strong and mudbloodeded

with hi tech wizardry

I cast a particular spell

and artistic charms

the inscriptive cryptic

tattoos on my arms

only one knows who's side

I'm on you know and now

you've been warned

like little Zacchaeus

up in a tree trying to

see the savior passing through

my eyes too long to see the truth

 

 

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catmartan

AWESOME! I LOVE IT VOLUME !

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Excellent write.

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