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Emotional Sky:

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My tear drops take the form of rain,

each drop represent that of pain.

High in the sky I rain out my emotions for all

to see. That is the sorrow that runs deep in me.

My breath takes the form of wind,

blowing around everything within,

trying to cool myself down with a gentle

gust of wind.

My soul takes the form of the clear blue sky,

the prettiest of blue one will ever see,

so clear that you can clearly see what I've

been hiding deep inside of me.

Somedays my heart takes on the form of thunder,

with lighting hiding just around the corner.

I live in this emotional sky,

and I really don't know why.

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conjones says:

Nice piece
 

catmartan says:

GREAT WRITE! I FEEL YA

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scash102 says:

Love your ways with words, very refreshing!
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2b2b2 says:

Tight piece.....ONE

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