IRRELEVANT CRITICISM
intoxicated by lies and hate
i’m going at this in a fast pace
i’m gonna go places, and in your eyes maybe i’m not
*** your opinion, i’m ready to show others what I got
you haven’t put the effort in
you don’t know what it’s like living with-
the constant fear of ending up unsuccessful
it’s so hard to think about it, it’s honestly too stressful
i want to grow up and be happy with the outcome
i want to have fans who know my story and where I come from
i ain’t nothing yet, but I hope to be
i want to survive on good vibes and poetry
honestly, your criticism is irrelevant
my God up in heaven-
has blessed me
i thank him every day, because poetry has changed my life completely
i want to be received,
by a proud family
i’ve been ***ing up all my life
i’m just trying to do something right
people always tell me “weed isn’t all that”
, I know that that that’s a fact
“Stop smoking weed you’re making a mistake”
*** you , i ain’t changing for your sake
the life i’m living makes me genuinely happy, if you don’t like what i do or say, then look the other way
once again i will say your opinion is irrelevant
especially since you’re not standing in my place
when i was down not knowing what to do
you wasn’t there for me
where the *** were you? huh? WHERE THE *** WERE YOU?
*** your opinion
i won’t let your irrelevant cristism affect my vision
you haven’t been through what i’ve been through
you haven’t lived with my issues
you got problems, i got problems
so tell me what the *** makes us so different?!
your just another hate based being
i’m the one trying to make a difference
i’m going to say it once more, and this time you better listen
YOUR OPINION IS IRRELEVANT
stop making hate your addiction
~PEACE

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Join free Log inThe Immortal Wize
Damn! tell it like it is, this is fire
Read The Immortal Wize 's poemshymnagen
Helluva piece! I felt the passion
Read hymnagen's poemsJay Beach
Dope. Opinions definitely are irrelevant. Be yourself and keep writing
Read Jay Beach's poemslove_supreme
Pow! Loved it!
Read love_supreme's poemsLife_Stories
Straight up ðŸ‘
Read Life_Stories's poemsLife_Stories
I loved it
Read Life_Stories's poems2b2b2
Brilliant...ha ha....well said....ONE
Read 2b2b2's poemsPoeticallyGifted
thanks for the support. appreciate it.
Read PoeticallyGifted's poemskavindra
I love this and is so true! thanks for sharing
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