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been gone for about 5 months. ive written a lot. but i felt compelled to share my new piece "The Heart's Deception".

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IRRELEVANT CRITICISM

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intoxicated by lies and hate

i’m going at this in a fast pace

i’m gonna go places, and in your eyes maybe i’m not

*** your opinion, i’m ready to show others what I got

you haven’t put the effort in

you don’t know what it’s like living with-

the constant fear of ending up unsuccessful

it’s so hard to think about it, it’s honestly too stressful

i want to grow up and be happy with the outcome

i want to have fans who know my story and where I come from

i ain’t nothing yet, but I hope to be

i want to survive on good vibes and poetry

honestly, your criticism is irrelevant

my God up in heaven-

has blessed me

i thank him every day, because poetry has changed my life completely

i want to be received,

by a proud family

i’ve been ***ing up all my life

i’m just trying to do something right

people always tell me “weed isn’t all that”

, I know that that that’s a fact

“Stop smoking weed you’re making a mistake”

*** you , i ain’t changing for your sake

the life i’m living makes me genuinely happy, if you don’t like what i do or say, then look the other way

once again i will say your opinion is irrelevant

especially since you’re not standing in my place

when i was down not knowing what to do

you wasn’t there for me

where the *** were you? huh? WHERE THE *** WERE YOU?

*** your opinion

i won’t let your irrelevant cristism affect my vision

you haven’t been through what i’ve been through

you haven’t lived with my issues

you got problems, i got problems

so tell me what the *** makes us so different?!

your just another hate based being

i’m the one trying to make a difference

i’m going to say it once more, and this time you better listen

YOUR OPINION IS IRRELEVANT

stop making hate your addiction

~PEACE

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The Immortal Wize says:

Damn! tell it like it is, this is fire

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hymnagen says:

Helluva piece! I felt the passion

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Jay Beach says:

Dope. Opinions definitely are irrelevant. Be yourself and keep writing

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love_supreme says:

Pow! Loved it!

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Life_Stories says:

Straight up 👏

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Life_Stories says:

I loved it

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2b2b2 says:

Brilliant...ha ha....well said....ONE
 

PoeticallyGifted says:

thanks for the support. appreciate it.
 

kavindra says:

I love this and is so true! thanks for sharing

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