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just different 2 min read 733 views Oct 3, 2014

Ringtone

you give me a voice to reason with

inspiring me with things to twist

what you write down hits no miss

lifting me high up off the ground

It’s like you’re reading my life

back to me in your poetry

I see me perched on one of the

branches on your family tree

you put me in the mood

to just be me who else

could I be unwinding and wanting

to smoke one, two or perhaps 3

light it up with a machine gun

your words spell every letter

I ever read casting a spell over me

activating the dopamine in my brain

stop the walls from spinning

around my unedited pain

green flakes falling from the ceiling

cupcakes never tasted so good

you make me a believer

clearly understood

your message is so chemical

stole me away like a criminal

so sublime and subliminal

you’re threatening my recovery

I feel like I’m about to re...lapse

Into a hive of bees

back to the old days

converting back to my old ways

losing my days, months and years

I got the chips if you got the dip

clean time but in the meantime I’m

hopelessly caught up into losing my mind

hello my name is …and I ‘m emphatically

dramatically and flowetically  an addict

anonymously addicted to your rhymes

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