“so in love! I'll give it all away.... just dont tell nobody tomorrow”

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romance 2 min read 447 views Oct 18, 2014

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He looked right into my window.. 
Staring deep into my soul.. 
All parts of me wanted  to feel his moments.. 
He took off his fear for me and allowed me to hold what was  underneath it.. 
His heart was erected has I imagined.. 
He  stepped closer to my naked emotion.. 
My eyes were shout tightly… 
Even thou I wanted it to be real so bad.. 
I had hope this was a dilusion .. 
He whispered open your eyes and look at me.. 
So I did , only to see his  big beautiful smile.. 
I looked at it as a child that is guilty of an act.. 
Some how the heart below was jumping with a force … 
I couldn’t control what would happen next as I take & follow his lead… 
He wasn’t afraid to touch my lips gentle enough for the cotton not to stick… 
I was in his world and him in mine.. 
His third leg walk a mile  deep within me.. 
I was alive but my heart stop beating for a while… 
I allowed him to enter my  place where I most tresured … 
It was paradise  to  him having his heart fold over & over…. 
Before I even realized I heard a voice so far away… 
It said “are you okay”…. 
My window was still close …. 
Then all I had seem to feel was my mind playing fantasy with me again 
Still I had hope to be blind…. 
So his face is the only face that I may find...

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hymnagen

Very visual .Drew me right in. Nice work

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