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life 1 min read 475 views Oct 19, 2014

Little Girl

So start studying your books little girl, stop focusing on your pretty little curls litle girl. Cause the world still gon' twirl even if you aint twirlin' with it. And all you're gonna have left is them boys who tryna hit it.

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xclusive

SO true, nice write

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wysevibez

thank you!

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love_supreme

Da*n, that was nice!

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Ak Rio

Too real, much respects

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