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first love 1 min read 518 views Apr 18, 2014

I thought...

He touched me and I thought lust,

He touched me and I thought security,

He touched me and I thought I was treasured,

He touched me and I thought I was the only thing he would ever want to touch.
 

He touched me and he thought easy,

He touched me and he thought quick,

He touched me and his thoughts were just of my flesh and my skin,

He touched me and he thought ,

He touched me and i thought love.

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love_supreme

Wow, this is a very powerful message for the lovers out there.

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Ak Rio

Deeper than my mothers apple cobbler, another good write.

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