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Lawless Deeds
harsh and cold
this world
does behold
hidden is the beauty
of the youth
it could be told
mine is mine
I dont combine
his behind
the doors
of others
is the hidden sublime
of his youthful
concubine
groomed
for pleasurable needs
his lawless deeds
in his demands
of an arresting feed
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Excellent write
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Am I twisted, or does this read like a window on things prurient in nature? Wonderful word choices. Bravo
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I like this poem.
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