“This latest poem - I am just not sure -the message is sound but it starts a bit odd - ah who am I kidding I am eccentric ”
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ancient passage of a night time shadow
growing with wisdom of passion and love
infinity takes on a new meaning
coming together
getting it right
after all this time
looking in the stars for the answers
heads in the clouds barley breathing
finally heads above water
I can see the light
darkness no longer holds its mystery
that ancient passage is never ending
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You are an artist. I would so like to know what inspired this write.
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Piece of Art well crafted !
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Very nice
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