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just different 1 min read 721 views Nov 7, 2014

Commonsense.com

I'm trying to get to

where I've already

been in my mind

I'm trying to get to

that mountain

that I already climbed

trying to get a part

in a scene

that I've already seen

I see in black and white

my mind wakes me up

at night

I don't need no light

to see whats not there

around me

everything that I found

was already inside

of me

a part of me

the art in me

the blueprint

the landscape

to the places

I escape

no eyes closed

I'm wide awake

waiting outside the gate

it's 3am I'm never late

a little sore

my bones ache

the foundation shakes

like an earthquake

trembles the ground

rushing in like

the wind without sound

barely touching the ground

like tip toeing around

the subject in public

no ties no bound

look around

there is nothing

here or lost to be found

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hymnagen

You killin me today...banger after banger. Wish I could be so inspired. Peace

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tretre

You are one of my favorites WizeDom...So naturally talented...I love this piece. Always keep that pen movin WizeDom!!!

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2b2b2

FIRE....Bravo!!!

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