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love_supreme
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lightness in the dark
We will make it through this. Believe that.

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It is amazing how you can be moved by one story. You heard about something that happened to someone and the story was told so vividly and with such design elegance that you were completely captured by it. Every thing and every one around you supported this story so you believed it to be true. It was elegant. 

Society supported it and the government and you were sure this was the way. 

This works fine as long as the story is not limiting, if that story makes you bigger than you thought you could be, its perfect. If that story required the sweat and more blood from you than you ever believed you could give, then it is a true story. 

If the story cripples you, makes you depend or blame the world. The story is only true because the human in you wants those parts to be true and you are truly limited. 

This is not gospel, its just a story. Think about it. 

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tretre says:

This poem had me thinking...I really like it. Keep that pen movin Latin_Lover!!!

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MellanatedAngel says:

Feeling this poem :)

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hymnagen says:

Very insightful. Thanks for sharing this.
 

love_supreme says:

thank you! I really appreciate it!

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2b2b2 says:

Truth....most relevant share, thanks!!
 

TEST66 says:

Love this poem. Excellent write.

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