“so in love! I'll give it all away.... just dont tell nobody tomorrow”

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romance 1 min read 481 views Nov 21, 2014

right but wrong

When you walk by When our hands meet When you say my name When you smile My heart just pounds Im under your spell I see those eyes Too light to be called be called blue With trim of green and brown They tell their own story Of how you will hold me forever And the way you smile Lights even the darkest soul Im spellbound by your perfection You think lowly abot yourself I tell you not to worry Because all i see is good But you dont listen If only you could see What might be

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