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just different 1 min read 699 views Dec 6, 2014

my demon

my demon

writing to get this out of my head

crying for all the hurtful tears shed

the hunter

keeps crawling back in my head

he is my demon

hunting my lifes breath

festing upon my dreams

controling my everything

he is gonna get me he always says

just look in the mirror

there you will see me

my demon

trying to come out

release me

we shall not part

I will feed upon your heart

turning it into dark

you shall not fear

for I am your inner demon

you can not deceive me

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Poet365

Bravo!

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love_supreme

Very nice.

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hymnagen

Beautiful yin/yang struggle capture

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royale jones

Deep deep deep! Nice openness to itgreat piece.

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2b2b2

Well crafted Capture.....Bravo!!

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Dug that piece

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