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just different 2 min read 613 views Dec 14, 2014

Pregnant at Sixteen

Pregnant at sixteen and she still in school

her boyfriend treat reckless she don't know what to

ran away from her foster home to be with this fool

everyday she run to me asking what should she do

I tell her follow your heart and you can never go wrong!

forget all the drama you can carry your own

get back in the home to support that child

soon you'll be making money that will seem odd

Friends come and go

learn to be strong 

keep to yourself or they'll bring you down

pray to your God and it will be alright

this is the intro get ready for Part 1

 

PART ONE

 

Last week 

my girl left me I'm feeling all kinds of bubbles 

she bout to have my seed and she don't want to be with me 

before I even knew got out of place and I hit her 

this is the way I'm brought up

disrespect 

you getting smacked up 

she thinking that she can change me 

this hood,  it brings me money 

she know that I got a felony 

a job is not gon work for me 

should see the way they look at me 

stupid just for coming G 

so I'm in the hood steadily killing off my people 

sometimes I don't mean to hit her 

but her talk is too mean 

almost got Shot 

man I'm Blessed to be here breathing 

she don't understand that won't even try to get a job 

but wanna eat every night 

with her heart in her hand I try to be the best man

 

-SpokenWordz_RHYTHM

JP

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catmartan

Nice Write ! Welcome to the Vibe !

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2b2b2

Well Crafted.....thanks for sharing.....ONE

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DallasCowgirl

Very well written! Thank you for sharing this piece of gem.

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