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just different 1 min read 517 views Dec 14, 2014

ACHIEVE

Energy is the substance of all means
we strive to be greater than equal of all things 
then plead when the wise despise us of these things 
so crude, rude, and arrogant they are 
to judge us by our words 
yet our actions show it all 
reflections with no mirror we mimic all their flaws 
all they try to do is help yet we simply shrug them off
ACHIEVE! 
Be equal than greater of all things 
humble your souls increasing peace within us and the streets 
learn to protect yourself from these fiends never at ease 
addicted to modern life everyday struggle n strife 
dealing wit complications as if life don't exsist 
Sheesh.. 
I just said some real! 
realize everyday you wake your winning this year!! 
Some people never get to see the new year of the year

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JP

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MellanatedAngel

great poem! :)

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Well Said....Amen

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