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just different 1 min read 734 views Dec 15, 2014

Concept Shun

Picture Me,  begging  you

Standing  on  my  tippy  toes

To  see  clearly  from  your  view  

2b  seen  by  the  likes  of  you

Too  sweet,  busting  gums

Eye  candy  yes,  herd  some - butt

 I’m  deaf  and   dumb,  pulling  tons

Want  some  feelings,  got  you  feeling

Some  sort  of  way,  so  you   portray

A  way   to  make  a  play,  one  act  auditions

 

Hoping  for  Broadway  review,  slow  down  baby

 

You  too  high  off  of  your  elevated  altitude

Projecting  attitude  on  failed  conquests

 

Acting  all  illiterate,  cuz  you  can’t  read  or  digest

 

No  interest  in  your  note,   now  confidence  is  broke

 

You  sulk  and  try  to  swerve  to  catch  my  eye

 

Saw   you  coming  so  I  diet  from  off   your  tribe

 

Shoved  off  from  fantasy  islands  that  you  make  believe

 

So  please  drop  the  mission,  because  its  impossible

 

Tricking  masses,  sweating  off  poll  driven  antics

 

Theatrics,

 gymnastics, 

 acrobatics, 

 back  lashes,  

batting  eyelashes, 

 half  off  sales,  

dinner  no  movies

 

You  don’t  fool  me,  

never  2b  slipping off 

on  your  imaginings!  

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catmartan

Tight Write ! WRITE ON !

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tretre

I so love this poem....Love the "I'm deaf and dumb, pulling tons, want some feelings, got you feeling some sort of way, so you portray a way to make a play, one act auditions." I like that verse. Always keep that pen movin 2b2b2!!!!

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2b2b2

Thanks much catmartan.....Namaste

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2b2b2

Thanks, no doubt tretre.....ONE

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TamaraD

Nice, I like

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love_supreme

Very nice.

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2b2b2

Thanks to all for reading....ONE

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