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life 1 min read 681 views Jan 13, 2015

The way EYE see it

The way EYE see it 

Life consist of seeking knowledge 

First understand your history       

Then yourself

And most importantly embody love

*** what the media portrays

The money,cars,clothes, and hoes are all irrelevant 

The higher ups are trying to hinder us

Distraction is their weapon of choice

Just be visulant

We all strive to overcome these obstacles

Whether physical manifestations

Or mental manipulation

Recognize your struggle 

Open your EYE

For its not what you see in your visual that hinders you

The facade of this present world is only a distraction

 

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love_supreme

Excellent write. This is a classical piece that will never get old.

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The Immortal Wize

Truth be told! Welcome to the Vibe

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Myactionspeak

Thanks

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lyrics_Poetry

Phenomenal!!!! Good Write. Can't wait to read more poems from you.

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LP45

Great work Myactionspeak, welcome. Keep going.

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T.LaShay

LOVE THIS!!!! No need to be superficial, when you have the option to be original, great message!!!!

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jsmorris

exactly lashay I love it very simplistic and true nice write

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RonnieL

Like this piece bruh...many are blinded due to not knowing self. This piece illustrated that to the full.

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