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just different 2 min read 534 views Jan 17, 2015

Take 1

undisputed in my family 

hit my brother in the head 

with a can of spam meat 

did some damage made me 

a sandwich grabbed a bag of chips 

bust my sister in the lip

with some tybo she swoll up 

like lipo moms threw a bible 

hit me with verse and a purse

chased out the back door 

ran up the block to the store

bought a can of coors 

a pack of smokes 

true story no joke

hid my eyes behind 

a pair of loc's went to my 

grandmother's house 

sat on her plastic couch 

she came home and 

put me out grabbed a knife 

and cussed me out 

I picked up a brick  

bust her window out

out to kill my step mom 

time to give back laid back 

for a come back 

she was a monster  

looked like a hump back 

picture that on a kodak 

pay attention to technique  

so next time you know 

when to speak 

shut your trap 

you got tapes 

but can't rap 

your breath smells 

like garbage 

that's trash talking 

disposable blogging 

powerless unplugged 

i'm laughing like improv  

you're unemployed no job 

call the police to get me 

locked up too late 

i put the glock up 

don't time me 

put the clock up

turn the Ciroc up 

time to get twist up

throw up

mess the flo up

having too much fun

to grow up 

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