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first love 1 min read 545 views Jan 20, 2015

soul mate?

 

A social experiment 

See where we went 

Almost to the top 

Now we must stop

Inscurities so strong

You have me all wrong 

I'm not like the rest 

I've already took your test

You just fail to realize 

Your such a prize

Can't even accept yourself 

So how am I expected to help

Don't trust me for shiet 

I can't keep trynna convince you I'm legit 

I'm not the girls in your past 

And boy if you can't see that

Your not ready for something real 

And I'm just mad cause I already knew the deal 

Your like a sunflower on a Rainey day 

Looking at you though my window I know it'll be okay

Started to give into you

Now your not even you

Now i really dont have the slightest clue

How this is makeing me feel i cant even say

I drown my sorrows in dreams and just lay 

To much time being wasted

More and more these days reality i cant face it  

 

 

 

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love_supreme

I think that this is true of many relationships. Excellent write.

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