“aspiring to be everything”

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life 1 min read 759 views Jan 21, 2015

Mr.

Hello Mr. man of excellence and distinction. Mr. ambitious even though facing daily pain and strife. Mr. do you have plans for the rest of your life? Got me feeling like forever could be possible with you..It's true because I look at you and see something real. 

But tell me what you feel Mr. nephew, brother, son. Mr. Egyptian king, descendant of African pharoahs whose blood runs through your veins. Mr. old soul with heart of gold.. Hello Mr. confident. Mr. unstoppable. Mr. break away the chains that hold our young men down. 

Got me feeling like I could drown in your conversation..That intellectual embrace..must admit you got me smiling all over the place. Mr. handsome. Mr. gentleman. Mr. rhythm, blues, and rhyme. Hello Mr. tell me..do you have plans until the end of time?

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2b2b2

Sweet Share....thanks

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PHIRE

Hello, Hi, Hey, Howdy....Ms._____. Thought provoking...

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Excellent write

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