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just different 2 min read 651 views Jan 24, 2015

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Its hard for me to smile when I see a homeless child who has been out there for a while what can be done for kids who have no fun what can I do who can i sue this is so wrong  tell myself to be strong non prophet you need to stop it organizations established for durations still there's no solid solution for the situation Christmas should come everyday Thanks Giving to oh a homeless child's birthday it should they live to see it you're pimping poverty you know that makes money like the law of gravity you take from the needy you're a Robin Hood you take from the hood slow down you're greedy your sweet tooth need a cavity they need more than a place to stay for a few days they need more than a sack lunch and a hot plate fundings and donates King Cobra is a snake my pet peeve is things that I hate hypocrites, liars give it a name its all the same the same smoke, same fire, same flames you all claim to be on a mission from god that seems odd being that prayer works like magic spring into action get on your job make this condition disappear help these kids get up out of here

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TeejVirgoSoul

Very Nice

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LP45

Nice. I like this.

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hymnagen

Sometimes its ugly, but I enjoy viewing the world through your eyes Wize. Thanks for your perspective

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love_supreme

Excellent write.

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darylg44

Wow....serious flow. Drop that science Wize that's what you do

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love_supreme

Very nice

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