“so in love! I'll give it all away.... just dont tell nobody tomorrow”

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first love 2 min read 555 views Feb 12, 2015

SURRENDERING TO LOVE


The journey has been so long yet the love is so new to our hearts
Fresh like morning dew my soul is new like the morning
Feeling it’s warmth as it surrounds my heart as it makes my temperature rise
I find myself woozy in love as love has hung me over
The taste of it still fresh on my tongue as I thirst for it like a dehydrated soul who needs it so

The night was made for love
Look deep within the stars and you will see romance
It’s not a coincidence that our hands found way to each other
The magic in the air has open our hearts to the heavens above
Love has consumed this vessel and finally nothing is left to chance
Let our bare feet touch the Earth as this love leads us into the clouds

The love speaks revelation to our soul
Eyes opened to the possibility which drown out doubt as love has instilled hope
Love has pushed me to open up like the sky to the heavens
Love isn’t to be figured out, just experienced to the fullest
In love, I gladly surrender my heart and soul and let it be the life within my veins

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Kelequien

I absolutely love this.

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love_supreme

this is awesome. excellent write.

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hymnagen

Sweetly crafted lovely sentiment

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skyyberry1987

Thank you guys so much

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