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just different 1 min read 426 views Feb 15, 2015

No Name Lane

My thoughts cry to the rhythm of the rain My heart sings to the forgiveness of the man Yet I faught to teach my self tbe value of worth But I can recognize it because of some pain So my lie has a name which is unforgiving I cant manage the principle to be true So i indulge in the essence of lies now truth is disguised and well a lie... remains alive

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Alekia Abeni

I really enjoyed this piece. Please keep writing.

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G.Moore

Line one. "My thoughts cry to the rhythm of the rain." I remember in one of my creative writing courses back in the day, doc would tell me that line one was most important because it'll draw the audience or run them away. Hella dope!

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asheena

Thanks...for the writers touch...I push power into a thought, I switch tempos so much to show that power is always in the begining....and even in the end...Cheers to the arts G!

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