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Brain Storm Patterns

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So you took me

cradled me inside a storm

abusing my thoughts to die

Pattering me so that I no nothing

leaving me to function like a hurricane with no rain

but rather pain

Torn from the debris of feelings

Tormented by the pressure of your nothing

Lied to by a mouth with no lips

Haunted by a spirit that never had life

You patterned my brain to a storm

I passed heal

I am more than just a storm

I am a patterned with a  forecast

that has a personalized class

that can out last

any

Brain Patterned Storm

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love_supreme says:

Excellent write.
 

after vision says:

my poet, set fire to that rain and show your strength

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